The Great American Road Trip
Book: Five Skies by Ron Carlson
As I read Five Skies, I realized I was learning something about my father, that I had never thought about before. That’s the way it is with novels that rise above the ordinary. Literature teaches us something about the people we know, as well as bringing to life places and people we don’t know.
“Measure twice, cut once,” my father would say. His strict father, a tin smith who worked on furnaces and ductwork, insisted he do things right. “Live so that the world will be a little better when you leave.” Although my father never had formal training as an engineer, he had the soul of an engineer. I remember him making diagrams for how to plant a vegetable and flower garden. I remember the care that went in to getting a home improvment project built well.
The main character in Five Skies, Arthur, is called an engineer, because that is the way he approaches his work. Idaho Author Ron Carlson could have been describing my father when he wrote this passage:
“It cut across his grain to use a tool for the wrong purpose. Arthur Key had never used a wrench as a hammer once in his life or a pliers as a hammer or a pliers where a fitted wrench was the right tool.”

Any time I am tempted to hit a nail with the handle of a screw driver, I hear my father cautioning, “Always use the right tool for the right job.” And these similarities between Arthur Key and my father got me thinking about the “why” of this concern with doing things right, and I realized that like Arthur, things had gone terribly wrong at one point in my father’s life, and he felt compelled to keep things as orderly as possible, to keep life under control.
The novel Five Skies itself is crafted like a careful workman’s project, using words instead of wood and metal. Nothing is wasted. It all fits perfectly. Just like the project they are working on, the life stories of the three men slowly take shape. They talk plainly like working men would, but the speech is purely poetry. A family grows as the three strangers fill their roles, the young man, the middle-aged man, and the older man. For all of them, work is the center of attention. The work provides solace, it provides a sense of worth, and it provides something to fill empty spaces and shut down thinking about the unpleasant past. Arthur says, “I believe in work.”
Arthur’s profession before he took this pick-up job on the rim of a canyon in Idaho, involved creating illusions for movies. But even illusions take careful craftsmanship.
“He hated magic. It made people careless and hopeful, and he had a low tolerance for anything that disregarded cause-effect.”
I remember my father’s disdain for jazz music. “How do they know when they are finished?” All three men are here working on this project in order to shut out something in their past, and Ron Carlson reveals the stories slowly. We learn about them as they learn about each other, and the young man, Ronnie, gains confidence as the others become father figures teaching him about work and life.
Idaho–with its mountains, cliffs, rivers, weather, and, yes, the skies– becomes a character in this novel. The men learn to read its story, too, and it alternately charms them and betrays them.
The go for a picnic in the canyon:
The river came through this park winding in a perfect S and the sand and willows and twenty gigantic cottonwoods were half in the shade. The air rode down the river fragrant with water and willows.

Ken and I have taken road trips through Idaho–from north to south through mountain passes and over lava fields, and from east to west across the bottom of the state through rich farmland and plains, and the pretty cities of Twin Falls and Idaho Falls. It is a beautiful state that beckons you to explore sparsely populated landscapes.
The top picture is from Flickr with Creative Commons license. (Click on the photo to see more of the photographer’s work). I shot the picture of the tools, and retain the rights. The mountain pass picture is furnished by the Idaho Tourism Office.
What is the first comes to mind when you hear “Idaho?” Well, okay, the second thing, after “potato”. Have you been there? What did you see?


Idaho has never occurred to me as a destination – until now
I’ve never been to Idaho, but have always heard it was lovely.
The “when do jazz musicians know when they are done” quote made me laugh out lough. What a hoot!
Thanks Frugal Kiwi. My dad always liked to make people laugh, and I like to make people laugh with his lines.
I’ve never been to Idaho, but your descriptions and Ron Carlson’s book make me want to visit. It sounds gorgeous and rich in landscapes and natural beauty.
This made me smile. My father was an imperfect fix-it man. In fact, until I got married I didn’t realize that you could replace light fixtures and such without calling a handy man. My dad is good at many things, but I wouldn’t count fixing things around the house as one of them.
This makes me want to see Idaho; I’ve never been.
You always have a way of making me want to visit every single place you write about. Idaho has now officially made it onto my (very long – and growing) list.
I think that Idaho is one of the more gorgeous states in the union. People need to give it more credit — try traveling further north than Boise!
Thank you for posting about my adopted home state. I have heard Ron Carlson’s name mentioned on NPR here before but never have run across his work or a review of his work. I’m glad I finally found some time to read this review as I had been told about it a while back.
Hi Laura:
I had not read Ron Carlson’s work before, either. He teaches writing, and is better known for short stories than novels, which is part of what gives his writing that clean, Hemmingwayesque feel, I’m sure.
Soon, I’ll be living part-time near LoLo Pass where Lewis and Clark crossed the Bitterroots into Montana. I’ve got lots of Idaho exploring on my list. Can’t wait to read Five Skies.
Those are the Bitterroots in the background of the photo at the top. I can’t wait to come visit you in Montana. We’ve talked a lot about following Lewis and Clark’s trail, but never quite got our act together.
I can hear your father gritting his teeth now at my approach to home improvement – I’m constantly measuring once (and then cutting twice as a result), and using ad hoc tools because I’m too lazy to run to the workbench for the right one!
Maybe reading this book will teach me a thing or two about planning and patience, eh?
Funny, Casey. Is that because you take a more relaxed attitude to measuring ingredients??
I have been waiting for A Traveler’s blog to make it to Idaho! Idaho is a best kept secret—and in the middle of things. Within 30 minutes, I can be skiing in the mountains, or hiking in the high desert. I love living here! I think I am going to put together my top 10 list of things to do. -r
Have you ever read Ron Carlson’s books before? And I’m looking forward to your top 10 list. It will be hard to stop with just 10, I’m sure.